Annotation 10: Shooting Script. Episode 3. Page 48 (3/48)

D/061/A/043/A/05 Shooting Script Episode 3. From Papers of Andrew Davies

One page with six comments: 1. Note on actor performance for Ladislaw's dialogue. 2. Note on directions for Ladislaw and Dorothea to smile at each other. 3. Circled dialogue with a comment questioning whether to cut. 4. Note at top of the page with an arrow pointing to the previous note. 'Sorry' written in capital letters with an explanation detailing why the dialogue cannot be cut but should be reworked instead. 5. 'intimate' written in brackets to describe actor performance. 6. Note to provide subtext of Ladislaw's dialogue.

Andrew Davies

George Eliot Archive, edited by Beverley Park Rilett. https://GeorgeEliotArchive.org

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